imaginary planet plan

Imaginary Planet Information Report

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

Buggies
Keywords
Push button for speed and for wings
big motor
Speed boost
Twin turbo
Go to cities

Topic sentence
To drive around on Mars 2.0 men need buggies
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
You use the buggies to go to cities they are twin turbo and they have a big motor so they can fly.
When you are about to fly you need to push a button for wings and to fly you will need speed boost

Strange Things

Keywords
Beats everyone up
Fat as a hippo
Trees - money
Game
wifi

Topic sentence
On Mars 2.0 some unusual things happen

Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
mars 2.0 rans donald trump Donald trump beats everyone up and he is a fat as a hippo. the trees are not like our trees on earth the trees on mars 2.0 grow money on the trees. The best thing about mars 2.0 is there is the game fortnight and free unlimited wifi.
Mars 2.0 is red black and blue it is kinda like the galaxy.

shops
Keywords
The warehouse
Supermarket
Honda shop
Topic sentence
On Mars 2.0 people can shop.

Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
The shops that are going to be on mars 2.0 are the warehouse. we are going to need a supermarket and a shop that I would like to have a the honda shop for motorbikes.